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Drops of Sorrow

July 9, 2023 by Deanna Repose Oaks 2 Comments

I used to think rain drops meant the sky was crying
Wicking the pain from the heavens above
I used to think dew drops were tears left by fairies
Who missed their chance at true love

I always thought of them
As drops of sorrow
Until my own pain
Filled up my today and tomorrow

Now I see the way the water washes
Cleanses the earth beneath the downpour
I see the way the water sustains
Feeds the plants; flowers more

I need the rain to remember
To display the rainbow bright
So I can get through my sorrow
And bask again in happy light


The poem above was sparked by a line on page 350 of Vacation Wars by Meghan Quinn. Instead of using the word tears, Meghan used an euphemism I had never really thought of before, and it got me thinking of tears, and before I knew it, there was a poem pouring out of me. Hope you enjoy!

Filed Under: Random Poetry Tagged With: tears

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  1. Holland Karen says

    July 9, 2023 at 8:17 pm

    This is AWESOME! Great job, sister!💗

    Reply
  2. Phyllis Betton says

    July 11, 2023 at 8:29 am

    I could feel the raw feelings of sorrow and then the washing clean of the rain. I love it when a writing pulls emotion out of me. This is a soulful poem.

    Reply

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